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06/07/2008 01:48:57 PMPost actions
"red eye" not acceptable here, pity because the color composition and contrasts are cool.
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06/06/2008 12:54:48 AMPost actions
Nice attempt, but the lighting on the eye is pretty harsh. Is this using the on-camera flash? Some side lighting with a bit of catch-light would really help this one.
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06/05/2008 09:20:15 PMPost actions
Area around the eye seems overexposed and the eye color is unnatural. Great Mardi Gras theme though.
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06/04/2008 05:02:06 PMPost actions
love the eye color. imo just a little too much light on yellow trim
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06/03/2008 02:40:31 PMPost actions
The composition seems a bit unbalanced and, more distracting, the eye beyond the mask is overexposed (flash ?) and slightly OOF.
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06/03/2008 10:16:55 AMPost actions
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06/02/2008 09:09:30 PMPost actions
i like this, but i think that i would have liked to have seen more of the face in the shot.
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06/02/2008 09:06:05 PMPost actions
colorful mask, the light on the eye is too bright though
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06/02/2008 01:34:29 PMPost actions
Not sure if it's intentional - but I like the fact that the hair matches the top feathers and the background matches the green ones :- )
Great colours.
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06/02/2008 08:36:20 AMPost actions
I've looked at this three times and it just keeps getting better. Very edgy. First the colors are wonderful. The crop works well, gives the feathers room to lead the eye. The off-center eye and the hint of the other eye hole seals the deal. 10
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06/02/2008 01:08:02 AMPost actions
The on camera flash is too harsh. It lost all of the contrast in the eyes. The image itself isn't bad its just not spectacular. Good luck though!
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06/02/2008 01:00:30 AMPost actions
Really good colors but the eye is a bit "hot". Good luck!
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