Had to force my sister to do this. my first time trying a portrait with the limited equipment i had, isnt one of my favourites but i didnt really feel like waiting a week to try something else ha. hopefully it does OK.
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Nice control of the light essentially cutting Lindsay's face in half. I like the effect. I might have tried to move the hair that is casting the shadow on her cheek. Nice sharp focus for her eye.
ok I understand your going for a light dark split here but the light is to harsh on the cheek and destroying the detail and the dark side seems a bit flat 5