Sweet Portrait! I believe that a more simplified background could help this setting...as well as a crop tighter on the "head-room." She does "serious" believably well. :)
The best of the portraits of young girls in the challenge. The natural light makes this quite beautiful. Would a tighter crop, eliminating some of the top, helped too? I don't know. 7
I love window light. Some day I am going to have to learn how to do it. You have used window light to perfection. Lovely young lady. I like your shot very much.