I like the burned contrast here, The texture of the hair ends is great too. I think the titled view and cocky swagger of the subject can't undo some of the flaws here. the picture lacks a bit of depth and the compostion looks like an after thought. GEt yourself in a studion because you have the talent to shoot out tens here. This one fall just short of that.
I don't like the over-processed look- harsh contrast, clipped black point and over-smoothed skin. The tilt is OK but would've helped if she were looking at the camera.