this has potential, but the composition unfortunately lacks interest.
i would have cropped the left part completely just so that the person is on the left edge of the frame. that way you would have gotten rid of the bushes, some of the stones and the railings with the post, whichare very distracting elements. also including more of the water would have added to the serene feel of the image and what were trying to accomplish with the title. what also bothers me is that the head looks really dark as if the person has a herlmet on or something, really strange.
the colors and the processing are very well done. overall a 5 |