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05/24/2008 01:55:33 PMPost actions
Focus is too soft, and the dappled light isn't to any great effect. Pose looks accidental. Keep trying though -- you have a great model there.
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05/23/2008 10:20:48 PMPost actions
good detail in the shadows. composition is not appealing. Too tight of a crop? Good looking kid.
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05/23/2008 09:25:20 AMPost actions
there is not interest in this. is just a picture with a few light spots that really were not ment to be there it seems like. some more creativity could help this
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05/23/2008 09:19:10 AMPost actions
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05/22/2008 11:30:09 AMPost actions
This is a sweet shot but I was thinking that taking it at the child's eye levell might have made it even better.
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05/21/2008 07:39:22 PMPost actions
Momma's darling, Daddy's little man. Focus seems a little soft for a non-artsy shot.
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05/21/2008 05:43:45 PMPost actions
Maybe these are my eyes, but it looks like his hair is in focus. Try to focus on human eyes. He is such a lovely model. The dappled light is significant element of the composition.
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05/21/2008 04:26:08 PMPost actions
Makes me wonder what he's gazing at..? Nice dappled background too.
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05/21/2008 10:10:08 AMPost actions
needs more range of values
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