yeah not one o my best no where to go but up i hope, i was just excited about becoming a member and had to throw my hat in the ring, thanks for the comments
A bit soft and grainy on the chip. I think there is some camera shake going on in combo with a shallow DOF.
I think there is also a lot of JPEG compression going on here that is robbing you of some detail. Your file size of 71k when you could have used up to 200k bears this out. Check the JPEG compression settings in your image editor and always try to save as close to the limit for a challenge as you can get it without going over.
Though the reference to a camera is made just underneath the 'techie bits' I don't feel that this is a true portrait of a camera as your subject is mainly the 'components'. The image seems slightly soft/blurred to me and lacks interest. I'd like to have seen more of the camera and better focusing. This is just my humble opinion :o)