Nice colors and but the flowers in the background almost blend in with your subject. You might have had a better shot if you'd have moved just a little to the left to get a darker background. Just a thought.
Great colours, but the main subject is still soft. It's like only the edge of the closest petals are in focus. The light probably was quite harsh, as edges are a bit overexposed. It makes the dappled light barely visible. Beautiful flowers, they just need more patience I guess.