Challenge:Out of Place (Basic Editing I) Camera:Sony DSC-F717 Location: apartment Date: Mar 30, 2004 Aperture: f2.3 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/80 Date Uploaded: Mar 30, 2004
First thing I think of is 'wow that's a small phone or a large baby bottle'. It's an interesting idea and fun take on the challenge. Technically it's not so good. There are light flares on the bottle - open challenge so no editing so that makes it a tad more difficult. You've cropped a little too much off the bottom and it's a tad unbalanced compared to the top - ideally you want to leave a little space all around a subject. I'm not sure what the black thing is, I assume a battery power or something, but it distracts from the phone and I dont think it really adds anything to the shot. Because the bottle is laying down on the background the background has become part of the shot, whereas ideally you want to isolate the foreground in shots like these. I assume there was a reason why you didnt stand the bottle up.
one phone in the baby bottle would have been better I find that the small black phone is distracting from the other subject and the background could have been different but it does seem out of place and a whimsical idea Kudos
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