1. Too dark 2. Too obsecure 3. The reflection of the pure glass pieces is distracting. Basically your shot, though not original, is a nice idea, just not executed well. 3
Image seems too dark and a little out of focus. Given the position that poor king is beyond chaos, he is dead! Serves black right for loosing his queen.
This one's a little dark on my monitor, so much so that it's a bit hard to see the chess squares. It could have looked even more chaotic, if a piece or two had been knocked over, or some of them weren't in their squares. Good attempt though at capturing the challenge