They had been meeting here for many years and it appeared that this little place with its checkered curtains had not changed at all over the years. They even still used the red Coke tumblers that they had so many years ago, still serving a variety of sodas.
As he looked at her, he realized that she still was just as beautiful as the first moment he laid eyes on her. The lines that had formed in her face had something so very familiar about them that.............
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Good composition. I like the implied quiet strength in a big "burly man". The type you would find in diner that uses red cups that went out with the 70s. The only thing I don't like is the blown out table in the left corner. It was the first place I looked, and I doubt you wanted that.
I think I would have liked a tighter crop on this one... less black all around... I especially don't like the table edge coming into the picture, I think it takes my eye away from the main image. Good story telling though. 8
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