Challenge:Out of Place (Basic Editing I) Collection:Portfolio Camera:Olympus D-490Z Location: Concord, California, USA Date: Mar 30, 2004 Aperture: 2.8 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/25 Date Uploaded: Mar 30, 2004
Well focused considering your shallow DOF. The things at the bottom are distracting, maybe you should have give it a tighter croping from the bottom. Maybe B&W.
Good eye on capturing this shot for the challenge. I think it would have looked better if you cropped out the lower portion of the picture just above the pencil. It would have eliminated alot of the clutter and made the picture more photographically interesting because you would be focusing in more on the subject.
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