as with alot of oddities i would probably suggest exaggerating your point of view. go up close and shoot upward or maybe get up in a tree...the location of the viewers eye i think hurt what could be a very dramatic subject. on the topic though i will give it a 7
Offsetting the pyramid to the right was a good idea; it brings the doorway more into the scene. Interesting that pyramids were originally burial buildings, so this wouldn't be out of place, except for the differences in cultures. I'm babbling.