Difficult - because I can see her, I want her to be in focus (as well), but if this image is primarily about the 'Peach Bouquet' (which it seems to be, unless I'm mistaken), then the flowers perhaps dominating the frame more, somehow, make this better in my opinion. It's a little hard to tell if this has had a sepia effect or just desaturated.
Interesting photo. Well composed with nice subtle tones. I think that a deeper DOF that includes both the model and the flowers would serve better (IMO). Perhaps you were trying to seperate the two. In that case I believe a bit more contrast would've helped achieve that.
This is a nice shot, but I'm not sure it lends itself well to this pseudo-sepia finish. The processing has added a lot of highlight noise to the brides lips.
This is a gorgeous image, but I fear that many will see the slight colors still in the image (ie, the greens in the bouquet) and not consider it a true "sepia" image even though it has a light sepia cast.
I don't think you did much of a sepia toning here as i can see the green in the leaves....but that could be my eyes playing tricks on me so i'm still giving it a 6.