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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/05/2008 10:09:48 AMPost actions
You have the right ingredients. The use of flash (looks like anyway) is really dampening any artistic possibilities here IMO. Lots of glare on the glass and the background is all greyed out and appears underexposed. Compositionally it's a little static with the centered positioning of the subject. All JMO of course. :-) Good luck in the challenge.
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05/04/2008 08:19:01 PMPost actions
mmm, mmm, like looks delicious, great colors
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05/04/2008 03:07:32 PMPost actions
The background and lighting is a little bland, but nice job otherwise.
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05/03/2008 12:01:46 AMPost actions
I maybe would have perfered a bit tighter crop - would have loved to see more detail in the fruit and less background. Great colors.
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05/02/2008 03:11:50 PMPost actions
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05/01/2008 11:41:06 AMPost actions
And nicely composed and lit!
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05/01/2008 09:32:12 AMPost actions
Bad angle i dont like the background
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05/01/2008 09:28:22 AMPost actions
that is a nice subject but how centered it is with a plain background is pretty boring.
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05/01/2008 09:24:14 AMPost actions
A little fuzzy, and the background is incredibly blan.
04/30/2008 09:14:41 PMPost actions
I like all the different fruits and colors. The glass is cool too. For me, if the background were different - perhaps a good solid black, the colors of the fruit would pop even more.
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04/30/2008 05:14:15 PMPost actions
A good attempt, but a bit bland. With a boosted exposure and a bit of extra contrast, this could have been stellar.
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04/30/2008 03:46:01 PMPost actions
Looks like on-camera flash? Nice fruit but it needs better lighting.
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04/30/2008 01:56:45 PMPost actions
Mmmmmm... makes my mouth water. xxx.
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04/30/2008 12:45:04 PMPost actions
good focus and color. light is abit harsh, the highlights on the glass distract, background is lightened unevenly
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04/30/2008 08:43:20 AMPost actions
Yummy. I wonder if the pineapple were placed upside down if I would be happier looking at this shot. ;\
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04/30/2008 03:19:37 AMPost actions
The fruit is colorful, but lacks an interesting surrounding.
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04/30/2008 12:39:33 AMPost actions
yum! I lvoe the colors, but the glare from the flash is a little distracting.
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