I'm going through the free studies (penance, you know, but actually I quite enjoy going through Team Suck results) and I'm thinkin' "Who the heck is Doyle?" other than a character on a TV show I once watched. Way to confuse an old woman.... :-) This is an excellent shot - quite like it and your processing. First thing I thought was "ah, picking lice out of her hair..." Heh....
I liked the HDR look of this. But of course I really like the moment you have captured. There is definitely some kind of story going on here and this photo makes me want to know more about what is going on. Why are all the young kids there? What is wrong with the girl? And why is that particular young man helping her? Very interesting.
The moment is well captured, but the HDR gives it an unnatural look which is not what I'm really looking for in an (otherwise excellent) photojournalism effort.