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I like the main subject of this, but I think a tighter crop might have changed the feelings that one gets from this. I see a bored audience not paying attention to the entertainer, but a tighter crop along the bottom and right side would truly highlight the entertainer, and make this a more enjoyable image (at least for me). However, perhaps you intentionally left the audience, in which case "The Ignored Entertainer" might be more telling. |