Nice studio shot. It would be improved with some more contrast to lighten the highlights and fill the available dynamic range a little more. You could go for a full high-key edit and lighten the background to full-white.
i think that maybe if her her left hand was slightly more away from the mouth it may have helped this shot a little more. lovely colours though and nicely sharp
The hair and skin tones are great. It is is nice pose. The red of the gloves, lips and blush seen to fight each other rather than blend. The eye shadow is too much and makes her look overly made-up