i love this photo, i keep coming back to it, it is really good, and captures a wonderful moment. i wish i could move into you picture, and live in it forever.
Hi, I think that is a good photograph. From compositional point of view I would more space on the right. The people on the background, on the right side, is a bit distracting but probably could be used as compositional element if the cropped girls on the right would be entire(with a bit of more blur on the background). I like the pose of the models and I would that be a candid photo. the sepia tone work well in this photo.
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