CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Okay, this is funny. I like how the girls are not in the frame -- it adds to that feeling of being pulled up and out of the frame. Actually seeing the trampoline kinda detracts from the "illusion," but without it, there would be no basis for a "game."
Technically, the exposure and lighting is good and the frozen action is really good. There is an odd effect (almost an edginess) visible, though, especially in the denim skirt. It looks like it was perhaps slightly underexposed, so it was brightened, then noise reduction used to reduce the noise. Not sure that was the process, so if not, try it on a picture and maybe you can see what I'm talking about.
Overall, it is a creative effort, but I suspect that some of the lower votes may have been because there is not a recognizable or familiar game in the shot.
Best to you in future challenges.
Karma |
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
