CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
5.1????? Amazing. I truly would have expected this to score higher than this.
Compositionally, I like how the coins, ship in the foreground and ship in the background form a triangle. This makes the composition strong as well as gives the eyes something to "travel" around.
Technically, I like the lighting on this and the "tone" of the colors. I also think the shallow depth of field is particularly effective. The details are visible throughout (though I had to tilt my screen a bit to make sure).
The only thing I can think of that might make it more appealing is to make the lighting more dramatic. Maybe play with backlighting or sidelighting.
Nice work and best in future challenges.
Karma |