A impressive concept, but the lighting is a bit odd. It robs this picture of its value. This shot has great potential, but it lacks the edge to make it great.
I think the cues are what don't work here. The balls by themselves would work without the rods. umm...wait a minute now I sound like Beavis and Butthead.
actually your image looks a little tilted, but i'm not detracting that from your score. I like that you are only showing the even #'d balls, but you should've put them in numerical order!!!
I like the concept and it is a nice photo. However, the pool player in me keeps thinking "there are 15 balls and 15 is not a even number". I like the inverted cues -- it really frames it well.