Remarks: not a postcard splendour by any stretch, but the casual exposure and overall focus could, IMO, be tolerated as deliberate, given the blurred, mid-air trail of the subject and the crazed energy it radiates. I speculate that a more exacting exposure combined with increased contrast would make for a more highly charged sense while appealing to a broader gamut of tastes. I'd also consider other options for cropping (excluding all elements that do not contribute to the overall composition).