interesting shot. I think if you are going to go down this road, there are several things that I have noticed. There is a white streak running across her face, the angles are good on her. she has nice legs, but with that angle her butt cheek appears to be hanging down adn does not look attractive, you could have even had the knickers not on there as it is distracting and you could have pulled the hem down some more to cover up her private area. The hair is over luminated and looks too yellow in some parts and pure white in others. The eyes look like they have been painted in and not so good at that, almost lopsided on one of the irises. Having the left hand elbow up a little more would have evened out her boobs so that she doesnt have one a lot higher than the other.