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04/15/2008 03:46:33 PMPost actions
I might suggest not taking the picture from above - move the camera down for a more interesting angle. Also, the composition isn't very strong in my opinion. Try moving some of the elements around until you get something that really catches the eye. Good try though! :)
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04/14/2008 10:02:45 PMPost actions
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04/14/2008 08:42:00 PMPost actions
It would've been better with less empty space. Try cutting off the top.
04/14/2008 09:17:43 AMPost actions
the overall sharpness of your image makes it stand out
04/13/2008 09:48:07 AMPost actions
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04/12/2008 10:51:57 PMPost actions
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04/11/2008 06:00:09 PMPost actions
Good use of kids toys for props here, perhaps a lower view point and a tight crop could help too? Suffers a bit from overall quality issues too.
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04/09/2008 10:51:03 PMPost actions
I don't think a photo of some toys really counts.
04/09/2008 10:44:39 PMPost actions
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04/09/2008 10:43:58 PMPost actions
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04/09/2008 08:59:46 PMPost actions
The backdrop really detracts from the image. The lighting also seems a bit flat and lacks contrast.
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04/09/2008 01:51:57 PMPost actions
I feel this would have been better if photographed from a lower angle, so we weren't looking down on it.
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04/09/2008 01:35:29 PMPost actions
Cute little village. I like the train going through and cotton ball clouds. I think with different lighting or maybe a different angle it would have even greater impact.
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04/09/2008 12:12:28 PMPost actions
good idea but a lower pov would've added more impact. Also next time tuck the mountains under the grass, maybe use a heavier material too, looks like different colour of same fabric.
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04/09/2008 11:24:43 AMPost actions
The lighting is a little flat and I think the picture would be better if the sky didn't overlap the hills.
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04/09/2008 03:13:33 AMPost actions
I think this would look a bit more realistic with different lighting.
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04/09/2008 02:16:39 AMPost actions
your focus is rather soft and spoils an otherwise pleasing image. 6
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