There's just a bit too much smoothing out a run the edges for me. The problem is that it can't be smooth once you hit the eyelashes, and some of the eyelashes are half missing which is a little weird to me.
the WB seems to be off - the picture appears to have too many yellowish tones. The DOF is too shallow to have everything in focus. It's very hard to get a real good p[icture of an eye. I am struggling myself with it.
Nice close up. The only thought is that I find it a little soft focus, especially on such a tight shoot. Trying to figure out what the reflection is in the center :) -6-