With most of the out of place entries, the subject that is out of place needs to be the center of attention, but this I think is good enough it would have been made better by placing the out of place item out of center. It draws the eye to itself, no need to force it.
If so - your gramatical error has SERIOUSLY degraded your photo. This lack of consideration only reflects poorly on your work and completely changed the meaning of your picture.
I have seen this photograph just recently, or a very similiar one, in the orange contest done by another photographer. Eggs are always cool. Great idea.
i would like it better if the out-of-place egg were off center and a bit more contrast and a more obligue illumination would be great ... the eggs are lacking depths and the white is not quite white enough
It's a little blurry and I think your white balance might be a bit off. It all looks bluish grey to me. I'll check it on a different monitor later. Nice idea though, and I like the angle.