There are some strange shadows at work in this photo. I think that they distract me from the point of this photo. Also I envision God's hand being more like something from X-Men. Maybe with cool claws or a go-go gadget something or other.
It's hard to comment on this picture. there is nothing wrong with it technically. lighting is not too harsh, focus is good, DOF is good. On the other side there is not a lot that tries to keep me involved in this picture.
I considered this idea myself. The original has the hands more open allowing you to see all the fingers. I think the photo would have benefited from that.