this is a very creative image- I really liked the way you framed the person walking just so- and the lighting...and effects/shapes caused by your capture of the light/shadow play inside... -
I thought this should have been scored higher- :)
There's a great mood going on here, but the building at across from the exit distracts from the man. There's probably not much you could have done about it in basic other than try to blow the whites out there.
man I'm a sucker for emo pics like these lol. I really like the dynamic range captured here and I think you've used the centered composition subtlely yet effectively