This is almost spectural and ghostly. There is a haunted look within the face and the hair swept back like it is adds movement towards the viewer. All together, this is an interesting shot to look at.
I'm not sure what you were trying to convey with this one. It's good, but not a glamour portrait. Strikes me as an illustration of the famous "bad hair day". Hope I was right with that take on it.
Nice image - Love the sharpness - Feel the eyes have been worked on too much and thus takes away from a striking image as they look too false now. Great lighting and soft tones.
Love the lighting and the super-shallow DOF! And a great model too! I'm not sure I would have left those pin-prick catchlights in her eyes though, they are just too small to look natural.