that guy looks pissed off! This could work for the cover of a video game. However, i couldn't score as high because it doesn't fit the theme as well as others in the challenge.
This is a great shot, I really liek it, but I think that you are going to recive alot of 'not enough colours' and I have to agree. The red is the only warm colour that you have in there, the skin tones woud lbe warm bar the fact they are in the dark area.
The suspenders are a nice detailed touch and the fact that the shirt arms are folded up to show the muscular arms is brilliant.
Defienlty my kind of shot, I really have enjoyed studying it, well done