Without the title I might not have immediately realized the hand belonged to someone other than the model. Perhaps her had on top of his would have made this clearer? Nice concept for the challenge.
Her hair being dreamy with that ear peeking out and the background really make the top half of this image a winner. The lower half doesn't excite my senses at all. I think it's too focused or not as dreamy as the top half... making it seem almost like two separate photos.