Perhaps the frame could have included the lady's entire head and just a little less of "honey's" arm. Including the wedding ring is a nice touch whether on accident or on purpose.
I might have liked this better without the mirror ... just for a bit more intimacy. I would have liked the top of her head and the tips of her fingers to be included.
But it's a great feeling of intimacy. Great idea and processing.
I love the tones of this image. I think that if you had maybe a tad more of his arms in the shot this might look better but over all it's a good take on this challenge.
Would have also beennice to see some expresion on her face. Good Luck you should do well.