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03/30/2008 08:28:24 PMPost actions
I wish the fence weren't in the way of the view behind the models. The shadows cast by the fence are a bit distracting. I'd love a tighter composition to get more of the expressions on their faces.
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03/29/2008 11:45:45 AMPost actions
Perhaps a tighter crop and taken from a lower vantage point would have brought us into the 'intimacy' a bit more.
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03/29/2008 10:39:30 AMPost actions
Nicely done. The wind thingies there are a bit of a distraction they just kept drawing my eye.
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03/28/2008 06:29:25 PMPost actions
wind mills disturbing, harsh ligth
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03/27/2008 02:41:28 AMPost actions
They should touch each other at least. Needs some post processing, rotation to the left etc. The shooting angle could be lowered?
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03/26/2008 11:00:20 PMPost actions
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03/26/2008 12:53:03 PMPost actions
Conversation or "negotiation"??? ;-) Beautiful shot, intimacy is a bit implied, but that warm smile conveys it.
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03/26/2008 10:58:51 AMPost actions
Seems to be a little tilt to the right, maybe a rotate would improve? Nice framing with fence.
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