Great concept. I really like the fact that they are looking into each other's eyes. I also like the position of his hand. The highlights are just a bit too much, though.
If his head were tilted to go in for a kiss... and maybe his lips slightly parted, this would have better emotion, I think. As it is, I'm afraid he's just going to spit on her. Sorry. I can't get past that feeling. Her expression is perfect. But, perhaps this wasn't staged and you had what they gave you. With that, you've done a good job.
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