I think all the comments are right on!
However--- my thinking was that she had a very content look
on her face. (she was almost asleep) Guess that didn't translate. : )
Did better on this one than the last one though!
This is a great capture of family intimacy. Close crop is nice. One thing that could have made it even better is if the daughter's expression looked a little happier. This expression make her look a little like she's had one too many pictures taken. Great shot that resonates with me because we have a 7 year old daughter and do the same every night... of course I didn't think to capture it on film, so great work!