Beautiful, yet troubled is what I get from this. It meets the spirit of the challenge perfectly. I do wish that the shoulder and the back of the hair were in focus. A little too narrow DOF, if you ask me. But over all I'm going to have to give it a 9. Nice work.
Excellent job on the face, you are wearing a perfect t shirt....The lighting is flat which is also good. Hair is a mess which is a nice touch. If it was in black and white I'd give it a 10, but as is I like it as a 9.
Nicely done but I don't see a mugshot here, I see a bruised woman photographed for a contest. Nothing tells me she is being arrested or photographed by police.