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I had to come back and study some more on this shot, which is a good thing! For me, there seems to be something just a little wrong with it and I am not sure I can put my finger on it. I think the left hand side is a lot more bright and the guitar is blown out somewhat. The handle (have no idea what it is called sorry) is alot lighter than the other side. Maybe a little darkning wouldnt go amiss. I like her expression on the left hand side, the right hand side seems a little sad, maybe if she had had her eyes downcast as the other shot she wouldnt look like she was going to cry. I relaly like the fact that they are not the same sie, really makes you look at it. The right hand side is full of rich colours and they are deep more so than the left. Overall it is a great story board and think it works well. |