Very sweet portrait. Nice focus and I like the bright highlights. Bit of a pink cast on her hair to the left but her eyes are what commands attention anyway.
Well, your focus is right on, and the border compliments nicely too. The Easter colors are great also, so with that said, I'm not sure what you need to fix. I'll just say nice job on the lighting also. -BB
PS. If you need more of a critique I can give you one later.
Wonderful colors and very crisp focus. It could be my monitor but the lighting is a little bright and makes her chin and cheeks disappear into her body. The focus on the eyes is dead on which I see done so poorly in alot of portraits, including some of my own. Good luck to you.