Really nice try, but ... because of DOF the emphasis is on the white not the orange. Adjusting the DOF to be on the orange but not the white probably wouldn't have worked, just made it look weird. My only suggestion would be to extend DOF so it's all in focus but that might have made it look too commercial. Black background was a good choice though.
Interesting take on the challenge. I really like it. Excellent DOF! However, may I suggest including the whole razor in the shot (this is a personal preference thing for me), it would add more of a sense of completeness. Also, I'm not the biggest fan of borders (I don't mark these down because I score the shot, not the border). Good luck!
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