I love the inclusion of the powerlines. First my eye went right to the bird, that led to the power lines, over to the poles, down to the lower power lines, and straight over to the word DREAM. Perfect execution ... and perfectly paired with the prose.
Powerful, dynamic. My eyes are at first frustrated because I can't settle them somehwere - there's not much of a focal point. But if I just get my eyes to sort of unfocus and absorb the image as a whole, the wild sweeping lines tie everything in and it becomes powerful and dramatic. Wonderful!! :)
So many other songs with that theme that I love. The scratchy aged feel just exudes a dream sequence!!!
Dream when you're feeling blue
dream, that's the thing to do
just watch the smoke rings rise in the air
you'll find your share
of memories there.....
So dream when the day is through
dream, and they might come true
things never are as bad as they seem
so dream, dream, dream
or
Hold on tight to your dream
Hold on tight to your dream
When you see your ship go sailing
When you feel your heart is breaking
Hold tight to your dream
Its a long time to be gone
Time just rolls on and on
When you need a shoulder to cry on
When you get so sick of trying
Just hold tight to your dream