I really like the idea of leaving my imagination do some work. I enjoy that a lot, actually. I even like the somewhat low key effect, but the shadows around the legs and the bit of outlet between the legs is distracting. Lots of potential though.
Not to be mean, but this looks as if it was taken as you were falling The girl's legs are almost out of the frame and that leaves the blank wall and the small amount of tilt in the lower right-hand corner as the subject. Not high scoring components