Oddly, setting this on the horizontal and letting the pole lean would have been better (like the leaning tower of Pisa -- only interesting when the ground or the tower is straight).
I think this has a lot of potential. I agree the building should stay level with the pole creating the titled feel rather than have the pole straight and everything else feeling tilted.
However
I don't like the black boarder. If possible you should have stood further back and cropped so you filled the canvas with actual image.
Low quality picture with lots of pixilation and the the overexposed background annoys me a little.