Not sure about the centered composition here. I would suggest cropping in closer on the model to get her head and torso on the left up and lower third lines. I think you could improve this shot with a bit more contrast as well, it seems a bit flat to me.
I do however really like your choice of DOF and exposure control is spot on. Good luck with the challenge. 8
i love how every color found in the grass is somewhere on the girl either in the hair, skin, dress, or headband. the composition is nice and the detail is beautiful. Nice editorial pic.
i like the model. she makes that rock look very comfortable. must have been a hot rock though! =) i only wish you had cropped out the far left. i love the way the dress flows. :) cool idea.
The picture is veru interesting, but there is too much background space. Less background space would add to the picture, esp since the background is blurred.
In a color challenge it's a big risk to present a low-saturation image. But I really like the effect. Thanks for showing us something different. For creativity, subject, and location, I give a high rating. The composition feels a bit weak however. Perhaps there's too much negative space on the left. I still enjoy the image.
Nice approach. I think cropping just a bit off of the left would make it feel a bit more balanced and get rid of the bush (?) edge and rock (?). Because it is a touch darker than the rest of the shot, I find my eye drifting there.
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