IMO I think there is just too much blur going on here. I tried something like this in the past and it didn't go over well at all. I now see why. The blur stands out way too much.
Nice angle. Like to be able to discern the eyes alittle more, as well hidden as they appear to be. A little less on the left and more on the right, including the ear not chopped, make this better in my opinion. Like the tones.