My eyes had to work really hard to find the focal point of this shot. Is it the sunset, the silouhette, the storm clouds? Once I focused on the sunset, the picture jumped, but if I weren't "voting", I'd skip it altogether.
beautiful shot (great improvement over the original) - love the silhouettes, the bright color and contrast in the clouds - great angle, even the border looks good and completes the photo
Very nice, rich colors. Maybe less black border and more black from the trees and land. The thickness of the border is pulling my attention away from a rather nice shot.