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The background is too washed out and bright it draws attention away from your subject and makes it look darker. Maybe shooting in a different time of day or different angle would help.
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Bicycle in the back is kind of distracting, also your model has the handlebar stuck in her ear
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The background is very washed out as a result of the sun coming in the window. Shooting at a different time of day might have been better.
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the windows in the background take away from this.
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I think the bike behind the chair is a little distracting from the main subject
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I love this concept! It may have been improved a bit by simplifying the background - having something out the windows other than white light.
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Yes, she looks peaceful and relaxed. I find the bicycle distracting, especially the handlebar growing out of her ear.
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She doesn't look so at peace at all. It's difficult to pick up a message of peace from a smile so insignificant.
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Hmmm... Feels like a bit of a shoehorn.
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if the subjects face was at a profile the lighting would have worked better for you
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Nice pose. I think it would be better without the bike. The light through the windows is kind of harsh also.
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Love the funky rainbow coloured bike in the background - adds to the feeling of the photo.
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I feel the light from the window is too overwhelming and the bicycle is distracting. If you had taken it in very low light it would have a greater feeling of peace.
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