Nice idea & a good effort. What hurt here is the lack of interest what I mean is the curb comes from no-where and goes no-where we are in & out of the image in a second there's nothing to hold my eye.
Interesting how the angle is rather disorienting, but I need something more to feast my eye on. Also, I think it would be better in monochrome to get rid of the dinginess.
This could make someone very dizzy - you really used the perspective/composition to make what could have been a dull shot into something very fascinating!