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02/28/2008 09:18:48 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
First Impression
Nasty, gross, YUCK! Then funny. :-)
Looking Deeper
As a parent I connected immediately to the photo and the humor - after I got past the gross part (I guess being a parent helped with that too).
The concept fit the challenge quite well IMO, and I think many of the commenters recognized the connection as well. Could be why roughly 10% of the voters commented, and they scored it 1.5pts above the end average.
So what happened? I think either a number of people didn't get it and voted it low, however I think maybe a larger number were just plain grossed out by it and gave it a low score.
Kind of shows how subject matter can be a factor in how well or poorly an image does in challenges here. I could be wrong (often am). :-)
Outside of subject I don't see that much out of place on technical grounds that would drag the score down on this photo. There's a little bit of glare from the flash (tongue & peanut butter), but barely. The photo does seem just a tad dark, but yet the white of the diapers seem about right exposure wise. Compositionally I think you placed the objects correctly with a nice triangle formed between the hand, diapers, and face. One consideration...the border adds to the dark feel of the image and blends in with the darker areas. A border with a single black pixel, then white, (or vice-versa) would be interesting to try (to see any difference in overall feel).
Hopefully I'm not way off base, and this has been helpful in some manner for you. If you have any questions, or would like clarification, please feel free to send me a PM. Thanks. |
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02/24/2008 10:56:32 PM |
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aw man that is just nasty!lmao, it does kind of look like that though, your twisted:) |
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02/24/2008 10:23:11 PM |
It took me a little while to figure out what was going on partly because the diapers are cut off. A little wider frame might work better. I also don't like that the top of the head is cut off and the larger frame would help there as well.
Definitely wins the Yuck award. :) |
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02/23/2008 04:41:56 PM |
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02/23/2008 05:01:16 AM |
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disgusting, but I like it, hehe |
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02/22/2008 10:16:13 PM |
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Great shock value here. I couldn't eat spicy brown mustard for a while. |
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02/22/2008 08:48:50 PM |
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That peanut butter look funny/nice shot |
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02/22/2008 10:11:35 AM |
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Ummmm, that's gross. Funny, but gross. |
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02/20/2008 04:15:13 PM |
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Oh this is just too funny |
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02/19/2008 05:16:22 PM |
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oh man. oh gross. ohhhhhh. but funny. great expression. |
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02/19/2008 12:24:57 PM |
Boo! Another punch line gone bad, very bad.
Clever idea, and a good image. The image tells the story without the caption which I like. |
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02/19/2008 01:42:42 AM |
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Good humor factor, I sympathize with your plight, not superb in a photographic sense as I think it needs a bit more context...maybe a real baby! ;) |
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02/18/2008 09:05:03 PM |
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You understood the challenge and let the photo speak for itself. I would like to see a better lighting situation however. nicely done still. |
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02/18/2008 08:36:39 PM |
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Gross gross gross, but one of the few pics in the challenge that manages to get across humor and a technically strong shot...Laughing and cringing at the same time here |
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02/18/2008 07:49:26 PM |
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OMG!!! what an impact!!! ha ha ha, you're the one with the idea, nice, 7. |
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02/18/2008 05:07:21 PM |
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Funny, image is a little flat. |
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02/18/2008 02:30:52 PM |
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Funny! I hope people notice the diapers. The flash makes pretty harsh shadows. |
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02/18/2008 12:22:28 AM |
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