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I feel that this could benifit if the second peice of bread where in focus as it seems to be the main focal piece in the picture.
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I think just touch more contrast could help this one. Overall not bad.
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Nice colors and textures, but more DOF is needed.
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I like the DOF but think it would look better with the focal point being on the left most slice of bread.
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This is a really cool perspective of the bread. but the blue in the back?
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Wondering if your focus had have been more on the front slice, it may have been a little better composition wise???
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The focus here is on the wrong slice - our eyes are drawn to the slice in the middle of the frame, but it's OOF. A pity as the composition and lighting looks strong.
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Humm, nice composition.. your focus is the only thing that bugs me. I would have brought it in a little bit.
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The colors are really desaturated and the bread would have benefited from side lighting. i
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I feel you missed the focus here
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